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My edits have arrived!

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Ms. Barney never disappoints with comments that crack me up or show what I thought I’ve been saying is entirely unclear to the reader. I’m not yet sure how to make the changes this book needs, but years into this project, I’m still excited to explore. 

Carter Higgins sums up the mystery and discovery of the writing life in one perfect sentence: “The slow burn of bookmaking is such a creative joy.”

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Begin exactly where you are: an editorial letter to myself

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Boudreaux feels a strong connection to Miraculous.

Today I’m pulling back the curtain on where I am at this stage with my novel, Miraculous. The book has been pushed back to spring 2022, which means I haven’t yet gotten my first editorial letter. In preparation for its arrival, I read through my manuscript one last time and wrote a letter to myself. This is a technique I learned from editor Cheryl Klein (whose book, The Magic Words: Writing Great Books for Children and Young Adults, I can’t recommend highly enough). She calls it a “letter to a sympathetic reader” and encourages her authors to write one to themselves. The primary function of the letter is to teach a writer about her own work.

This letter is my gentle reminder to be kind toward my writing and my efforts so far.

Dear Me:

Congratulations! You’ve really come a long way! That’s the first thing I want you to know. I want you to see that as the accomplishment it is. There is some solid stuff here. It’s the strongest first novel draft you’ve ever turned in (…even if you’ve sent updates to the originally turned in version twice!).

This letter doesn’t have any major editorial work (I’ll leave that to Stacey to figure out). But here are some thoughts as I read:

word choice and rhythm

I know you want the words to count and to have power and maybe even some rhythm like some other novelists you’ve read. But right now, in some sections the rhythm is relentless and distracting. (Perhaps this is the downside of writing poetry and picture books?) I’m not sure how to break it yet, but it does need to be shaken up and changed.

chapters and scenes

Some chapters aren’t yet pulling their weight. Make sure they are doing double duty. Even better — always aim for every scene, etc to do more than the obvious work it’s doing.

“Five Pennies”. “The Second Show”. You need to move closer into the moment and bolster it with secondary things. For example, in “Five Pennies”, what else can be going on beyond the scene in the grove? What might further deepen it, or parallel it, or contrast it to Jack’s world? “The Second Show” currently has given equal weight to Jack’s two interactions with the crowd, when the second interaction is the key one. The melodrama needs to be toned down (How? Who knows right now? Why is melodrama your natural go to??), and the second interaction could, perhaps, in real time, contrast what he’s realizing about the doctor. Of course, this can’t come across as herky-jerky but smooth and logical and natural. Easy, right?

Also, you’re not deep enough yet or as present as you need to be. Think of the books where you are THERE in the moment with the character. Find that place and stay there. Easier said than done, but for now be aware of when and where you can move closer in.

sentence length

I know your critique group has encouraged you to vary and shorten sentence lengths and to remember natural dialogue doesn’t always happen in full sentences. The problem is you’ve chopped up some sentences in ways that draw attention to themselves rather than effectively communicating what’s going on. Yes, you write for children, and always using overlong sentences isn’t best. But! Think of the great middle grades you’ve read with lavish sentences that trust the reader will follow along. Think of Ursula Le Guin’s advice that each sentence should lead to the next, that as a novelist and a lover of words you can delve in and command the flow. Aim to work as a master craftswoman! Let the cutting and tightening come later!

layer and layer

Small details that aren’t there at present. Miss Moore finishing Mrs. Wells’s hat, for instance, in a later chapter when we see her again. What else? Look for places to make connections.

memory, stories, belief

Ideas the manuscript plays with (to keep in mind when story weaving): our memories inform how we see the world and ourselves, as do the stories we tell ourselves and others. These things inform our beliefs, whether we realize it or not. And memories — if they’re spoken aloud — can shed light on what’s true and what’s not. (Nana’s story of the fire; Silas’s quest to right the past.) We’ve got the statue named Memory to anchor this physically for Jack and Cora (and, hopefully, for the reader). What else? Taking the words of a child seriously. The things we can change vs. the things we can’t (and learning how to live in the middle). Promises made / promises broken / the burden of making a promise. Secrets and the burden of keeping them.

Remember, once your real letter comes, that you’ll probably feel unsure about how to proceed. Keep in mind “The Singing Bowl” — “begin the song exactly where you are.” You don’t have to have it figured out. You just have to start.

Here’s to plowing to the end of the next row.

Sincerely,

Me

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Where Do the Hours Go? Tracking Time as an Author

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New Mexico’s Battle of the Books state battle. These are the superstar readers of Hurley, NM.

This is a post for those who are curious about how I spend my time as an author. It first ran last year, and while my stats for this year are different, the sentiment is the same. And no, I don’t write for 10-12 hours a day, as someone recently told me a famous author does! I have people to feed and a life to live and some well-earned rest to attend to.

For years I’ve off and on kept records of my writing time (most especially while I’m on deadline). More recently I’ve kept a monthly chart in my bullet journal. I’ve used the charts to keep track of word count while drafting, and when in revision or research mode, I’ve used them to simply list which project I was working on which day. With a non-traditional job and a schedule set largely on my own, they’ve been a handy way to see how my work life runs from day to day.

Last spring, I read Laura Purdie Salas’s book, Making a Living Writing Books for Kids. In it she talked about tracking her work time to see where it goes, to determine if a project is monetarily worth her efforts and to remember to set aside time for her “love projects,” as she calls them — projects that aren’t assigned (like a work-for-hire book) but those she pursues by choice. Laura said she used a simple time tracker called Slim Timer.* I promptly checked it out. There are probably websites and apps that are fancier, but this one suits me fine. For the last year, on top of my bullet journal chart, I’ve been pretty darn faithful about clicking into Slim Timer before settling down to draft or edit or prepare for a school visit. It’s been interesting to watch how the numbers have fallen.

Last year…

I recorded seven months and almost 319 hours on drafting my novel, Miraculous. (Unfortunately I don’t know what I time I put in before mid-April). August clocked in as my busiest Miraculous month, with over 83 hours.

In September — my busiest month of the year — I juggled two deadlines. Miraculous got over 48 hours as I finished my draft, worked through critique partner feedback, and prepared the manuscript for my editor. My picture book, A Race Around the World, got over 46 hours, as my editor and I worked through multiple revisions. This is a reminder that while a picture book is certainly shorter and overall is quicker to write, word for word, a picture book is much more time intensive.

Over the course of the year, I put in over 44 hours doing events and other presentations, one hour less than the amount of time I put toward my critiquing service.

I spent over five hours on a poem that ultimately sold for $100 and less than an hour revising an old poem that brought me $50. On a whim, I spent fifteen minutes cleaning up a blog post that had gotten a lot of hits and sent it to Writer’s Digest. It sold for $275.

I put in more time on my blog than I needed (though I don’t know specifics. Last year I classified my blogging time as “promotion” — a catch all that didn’t leave me with a lot of information to analyze later. This year the blog has its own category.) I devoted too much time to a project that would have been more fulfilling had I spent it elsewhere. I found a way to be more efficient with a third commitment (not a book — those are never efficient! But I’ve learned no writing effort is ever wasted).

This year I see most of my time has gone to research for a new project, followed by revision work with my editors. A few days ago I was convinced I haven’t done much of anything lately, but looking back at my numbers I could see otherwise. I might not have much to show for my work at present, but I’m making progress, day by day.

With a job where I largely set my own pace and schedule, this information reminds me I am moving forward. I will see projects reach their end if I am faithful showing up.

*Alas, Slim Timer is now defunct. I’m now using (and enjoying) Toggl.

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