Caroline Starr Rose

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Like Old Bruce Springsteen

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…not that The Boss is old, mind you! Did you see him doing the splits at the Super Bowl last year? His older music. Ever notice how wordy it is?

After spending a year or so writing a novel-in-verse, I’ve returned to old manuscripts horrified to see they read like early Springsteen. Bruce can cram in the words and make everything come out right. The rest of us can’t.

I’ve spent the summer creating/revising old picture books, and wordiness is a constant issue. When you work with less, each word has to say more. That doesn’t mean, though, that longer works are exempt from careful examination. As I read through Self-Editing for Fiction Writers, I see more and more the need for precision in word choice. Sharper writing. It’s what turns a good manuscript into a great one.

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  1. Jeannie Campbell, LMFT says

    September 8, 2009 at 8:38 pm

    self-editing for fiction writers is awesome. it really helped me purge unneeded words. ๐Ÿ™‚

    jeannie
    Where Romance Meets Therapy

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  2. Caroline Starr Rose says

    September 9, 2009 at 2:17 pm

    Hey Jeannie,
    Thanks for following! I have to confess, it’s the first editing book I’ve read where I’ve actually attempted some of the exercises.

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  3. Dawn @ sheIsTooFondOfBooks says

    September 16, 2009 at 7:23 pm

    “Bruce can cram in the words and make everything come out right. The rest of us can’t.”

    Touche! Just one more way The Boss and I are worlds apart ๐Ÿ™‚

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