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WANT AD: Agent Feedback! I Need a Reader!

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I’ve just received a detailed agent letter, one full of suggestions as to how to re-work a piece that ends with an invitation to re-submit.

Usually when I get feedback, I can see what’s being asked of me. Not this time. Lots of the suggestions are really good, but I’m at a total loss as to how to proceed. I feel like I’ve been asked to go build a rocket out of, well, rocks.

I’ve got a fantastic critique group (Hi, Bonnie and Dayle), but we work through manuscripts slowly, as is typical in a group situation. I’d love to find another writer out there who does picture books, mid-grade, and a little YA. Even just mid-grade would be great, as I mainly see myself as a mid-grade writer. That said, this one’s YA.

Honestly, I’ll take any kind of reader. If you write for kids, you count. Anyone willing to exchange manuscripts? I’m talking long-term here.

The manuscript in question is a short one: 11,500 words, a YA historical novel-in-verse, MAY B., about a girl abandoned on the prairie. While fighting to survive, she must also come to terms with a learning disability.

I need fresh insight! And I’d love to read someone else’s work. Let me know what you think.

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  1. Kristi Faith says

    October 10, 2009 at 1:21 am

    Well, I don’t know if I meet the requirements…I’m currently working on a novel that wouldn’t be for kids..maybe some older teens…but I also have a WIP that is mid grade and I have written a couple of picture books(not published)

    I wouldn’t mind reading, putting our heads together and getting your MS in shape for re-submission, though!!!

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  2. Frankie Diane Mallis says

    October 10, 2009 at 1:25 am

    Caroline,

    I’m almost in the same situation-awesomest critique group ever (the FNC girls) but they can only read soooo much at once. I think the fact that we have nearly identical taste in favorite books is a good sign, and I’d be willing to swap, though my book is 145,000 words-but at the moment I only have 6 chapters that are finalized …so let me know if you want to swap. frankie.mallis@gmail.com

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  3. TerryLynnJohnson says

    October 10, 2009 at 1:59 am

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  4. Jade says

    October 10, 2009 at 4:22 am

    Caroline, I’d be happy to be a reader for you if you need someone else.

    I write YA.

    Drop me a line if your interested.

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  5. Dayle James Arceneaux says

    October 10, 2009 at 2:36 pm

    Oh, so I’m not good enough for you now. I see.

    Just kidding 🙂

    Yeah, May B. does not fall into my area of expertise. I just no it’s very well done.

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  6. Caroline Starr Rose says

    October 10, 2009 at 4:55 pm

    Hi All:
    Thank you so much for your willingness to read. I’ve found someone who’s a great fit. Keep me up to date on your pieces, and I’ll let you know how things progress.

    Dayle, you better be writing, by the way.

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  7. Sharon Mayhew says

    October 11, 2009 at 12:38 am

    I’m glad you found someone who is a good fit. If you go back to my blog, I have two friends with blogs that might interest you. One is Tess Hilmo, she just got an agent and is going through that process on her blog. The other is Amy A. Cook, she just got her first book deal and is sharing all the steps with us through her blog.

    If you need another reader my email is skmayh@q.com. Happy writing.

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  8. Tamika: says

    October 12, 2009 at 1:22 pm

    Caroline- congratulations!

    I will be praying for you!

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